If you are going to publicly slam a writer, and then claim that she should take writing advice from you, at least use the correct form of "you're"- not to mention the other 10 misspellings and grammatical errors.
I have been hearing Ben Sharkey's name more frequently, but I'll take your advice, Rebecca, that he isn't really worth a listen for me.
I must say this review is confusing, it slams the artist with words like "Boring, Corney and even Awkwad" yet you give album 3 1/2 stars ?? So what is it, do you like it or not ? You tried way to hard to show diversity in reviewing the album. It almost sounds like you liked the album but felt as a critic you should say something mean. As a critic myself I can tell your a young writer with much to learn. You'll get the hang of it eventually, go with your gut if you feel something is crap than let that reflect through out your review.
Very well written. Will be looking forward to more movie reviews by Mr. Franks.
Tell me what you think as a professional http://areyounevaknown.bandcamp.com/album/…
We visited Detroit the other week and were delighted by the variety and quality of the local beers.
Detroits FIRST bicycle show was held at Balduck park on Detroit's east side Next To BIKE TECH on August 16, 2009.
"The 4th annual Detroit Road and Track Bicycle show"
will be held on August 26th, 2012 at Balduck park on Detroits east side.
There's more to Michigan microbrew than Detroit! Keweenaw Breing Company (KBC), Shorts, and others are all fantastic representations of Michigans beer community.
I love this band! Yes, definitely a true spirit of Detroit's music scene.
WOW but to so to the point
the solid dudes premiere is a private event you need an invite for.
Thanks for the props, Joe!
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These guys are great and Jerimiah is a good friend of mine from way back, he is a great drummer and can sing alittle too!!! Good Luck Guys!!!!!!!!!! Chance!
Sounds wonderful… salt-roasted red and gold beet salad – ok I now I have to try and make this at home but who has time to roast beets? By the way - who does not like a good piece of meat? Ok, now I am hungry. Makes me want to break out the passport and go for a drive. Cheers! "clink clink"
I totally agree!! The minute I pulled up I knew something was wrong when I had to pay $20 to park! Then I was surprised with a double bed instead of a king bed I reserved. The VIP room was a joke. Cheese sticks, chicken nuggets, slidders, egg mcmuffins felt like free sample day at Sams Club! Totally not recommended!!!
Re: “Ben Sharkey”
I like when a review is truthful. Which I believe this one is. I enjoy the reviewers perspective, positive and negative or neutral. It lets me know they really reviewed it and are giving their honest facts/opinion. I look for these same kind of reviews when buying shoes online and it hasn't steered me wrong yet!